Wednesday, July 27, 2005

நம்பிக்கை

அன்பர் திரு. நாராயணன் வெங்கிட்டு வின், ‘நம்பிக்கை’ கவிதைப் போட்டிக்கான எனது பதிவு. அன்பரின் முயற்சி மிகவும் பாராட்டத்தக்கது. வாழ்த்துக்கள்.

கை வைத்ததால் சுரந்ததாம் வைகை!

பட்டணக் கூலி வாழ்க்கை, நிரந்தரம் ஒரு வேளை உலை,
இவை எல்லாம் துச்சம் என

விடியலில் படுக்கை தொலைத்து
நிலத்தில் கால் பொதித்து, கலப்பயில் கை பதித்து,

தலையில் கை வைக்காமல் “இங்கும் சுரக்கும் வைகை”
என்று, உழைக்கிறானே என் காவிரிப்படுகை
விவசாயி, அவனது மறுபெயர் தான் நம்பிக்கை

Tranliterations:
Kai vaithadhaal surandhadham vaigai!

pattana kooli vaazhkai, nirantharam oru veLai ulai
ivai ellam thuchcham ena

vidiyalil padukkai thulaiththu
nilaththil kaal podhithu kalappayil kai podiththu

thalayil kai vaikkamal "Inghum surakkum vaigai"
endru uzhaikkirane en kaavirippadugai
vivasayi, avanadhu maru peyar dhaan nambikkai.


18 Comments:

At Wed Jul 27, 06:29:00 AM CDT, Anonymous JVC said...

Excellent !

 
At Wed Jul 27, 08:42:00 AM CDT, Blogger WA said...

Great

 
At Wed Jul 27, 09:53:00 AM CDT, Anonymous lxsn said...

wow... u are really multidimensional...

nambikkai..

intha 'nambi' yin 'kai' pidikum tharunam
miga viraivil varadho ena
jannal kambiyil kai pathithu
vizhiyoram kanavugal kodi
vaigai pol surakka
kaathirukkum nangai vidum perumoochilum velipaduvathu..

~lxsn ;)

 
At Wed Jul 27, 09:53:00 AM CDT, Anonymous lxsn said...

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At Wed Jul 27, 10:51:00 AM CDT, Blogger krishna said...

tj..

can u please transliterate it ito english if u don't mind..

2 much tamil to decrypt...:)

 
At Wed Jul 27, 11:37:00 AM CDT, Blogger TJ said...

jvc and Wicked angel Thanks for visiting.

lxsn,
ungal nambi viraivil kaipdikka vaazhthukkal.

krishna,
Transliterations have been added. Thanks for visiting

 
At Wed Jul 27, 05:36:00 PM CDT, Blogger Kasthuri Srinivasan said...

Really good...you are awesome in poetry.

 
At Wed Jul 27, 06:38:00 PM CDT, Blogger ranganathan said...

thaleeva.....

eight line maximum......:-)

 
At Wed Jul 27, 09:36:00 PM CDT, Blogger krishna said...

that was too good..

yengirundhu surandhadhu indha inbathamizh kavithai..amarkalam..

btw.how do u post in tamil???

 
At Wed Jul 27, 09:54:00 PM CDT, Blogger ioiio said...

Kalakkare Nathu..

 
At Thu Jul 28, 12:41:00 AM CDT, Blogger Anand Ramamoorthy said...

TJ

great poem. just wondering...
of all the things which got out of poor Pandora's box don't you think hope is the worst. it is the cause of bodage according to SriSankara who feels that the being in misery should cultivate vairagya instead of hoping for miracles. I think you must have a separate blog for poetry.

 
At Thu Jul 28, 03:53:00 AM CDT, Blogger TJ said...

Kasthuri, Thanx for visiting!
Ranganathan, 8 varigalukkutpatadhaga maatri amaithagivittadhu. nandri.

Krishna, it is to type in a word editor in Tamil fonts and paste it in the blog window.

iio..
Nandri thalaivaa...

Anand,
yes, even buddha said hope leads to desire inturn to misery

 
At Thu Jul 28, 09:43:00 AM CDT, Blogger Random Access said...

probably my first comment here, though have visited a few times..beautiful verse.. I really liked the brimming optimism in that!

Random Access
The search has just begun !!!

 
At Fri Jul 29, 11:31:00 AM CDT, Blogger TJ said...

Thanks Random Access,
Keep visiting, and Keep commenting :)

 
At Tue Aug 02, 01:24:00 PM CDT, Blogger sen said...

nice one tj.one of the best of all the nambikai poems i have seen so far.

 
At Wed Aug 03, 07:39:00 AM CDT, Blogger TJ said...

Thanks Senthil,
Keep visiting!

 
At Sun Aug 07, 12:12:00 PM CDT, Blogger sukhanya said...

hey nice tamil poem. I used to write when i was in school but stopped as I moved on to 10th grade.Am not sure if i can start writing again.

(how to get tamil fonts?????)

take care
sukhanya

 
At Mon Aug 08, 05:52:00 AM CDT, Blogger TJ said...

@Sukhanya,
Awaken the poet in you.!!
Tamil fonts can be got at http://www.bhashaindia.com/downloads/downloads.aspx?lang=ta

 

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